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This is part two of Call of the Wolves. I don't usually editorialize on my own stories for obvious reasons, but this one was severely cut.
Spoilers:
Originally, they went to the bar, went out damming, went back to the bar to get Bellafauna, and went out damming again.
I wasn't quite pleased with how placid this chapter felt, however, I wasn't about to add unnecessary battle scenes or any obstacles that wouldn't naturally occur. Outside of restructuring the entire chapter to add in situation, there wasn't much to do. Besides, building up later situations is more important to me anyway, such as Cyras being recognized more often. I also made sure there is a new development or new bit of information each page, so we're finding out more about this very dull and lifeless land.
On the other end, I was glad to add in some more of the German vibes to this place. Before posting, there was at least one or two hours of me wrassling with Grammarly. And of course, before that is the hours and hours of revising. Between writing and published, 2/3rds of my time on a story will be spent on rewriting.
Unfortunately, I lost some resources so I am having to rebuild my own writer's checklist so I can make sure I maintain a quality that I deem acceptable for my stories and for my readers.
My favorite part was making some of the jokes at the bar, such as Cyras slapping and whapping Ahmond and poking her in the eye.
Hopefully you have some joy in reading this. Thank you.
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