This is just some random stuff to note about N:Era with Flowers. So two of the characters are actively named after flowers, those being Rosod (Rose) and Lilu (lilies). Every character's name is a corruption of something from nature. A couple of Ascended usually have names that are "Human-like". Owlis is pronounced as "Alice" and Cyras is pronounced as "Cyras'". Ryvoh is River.
"The younger fox sat at the entrance hole and bristled her fur. A field of tulips laid to her left." - Tulips actually symbolize the beginning of love. Roses are representations of true love, and notably, at the end, Cyras receives Summer Roses. So she has associations with white flowers. Yes, I know this symbology is obscure, but I felt like I should finally mention that.
-While Owlis is called Cyras' cousin, they're first cousin's once removed. Cyras' mother Sumhyr is Owlis' cousin because they share a grandmother (Who is unnamed so far or potentially "Time", but I won't spoil. For further purposes, she will be called One Foxy Mama). The child of your cousin is your cousin once removed.
-Kryyk and Cyras are also cousins once removed. Kryyk is the little brother of Ryvoh, meaning Kryyk is actual Owlis' cousin.
-Now if Kryyk was Ryvoh's son instead of brother, then technically Kryyk and Cyras would be 2nd cousins, as they both share the same great-grandparent (One Foxy Mama).
-Wysdom is about 1.2 million square miles and mostly lost land due to the relinquishing, therefore Wysdom is bigger than the Holy Roman Empire and the Byzantine Empire.
-"The pond was secluded with no one near except for some fish. Lilies and poppies that filtered water quality and added some privacy. Good, Cyras was hungry. She lapped up some water before she jumped and immersed herself.
Smirking at one fish, a quite big goldfish, she blasted jets of flames from her paws. The steam-powered fox spiraled around, bit, and flew out."
Alright, so essentially, lilies and poppies help filter out chemicals from water, making that water better to drink. Since this is Owlis' private garden, that's a sign of how Owlis filters her own ponds.
Also, Cyras being able to flame around underwater isn't impossible. Underwater flames are a result of flames receiving oxygen. Water doesn't beat flames, water smothers flames. But if the flame has a source, the flame is gonna burn.
Ironically, later on in the series, Cyras can't escape ice shackles because the fire needs some time to melt the ice. So fire sorta beats ice in the same way water sorta beats fire.
Anyway, I just thought this was cool stuff I never talked about, right.
A blog all about my writings and also ramblings about writings
Tuesday, January 17, 2023
N:Era Fun Trivias
Friday, December 23, 2022
Happy Birthday Post
Yo so this is actually my hundredth prepared post on my blog. That doesn't necessarily mean anything, this isn't my hundredth posted.
Uh, so 23rd is my birthday, 25th is Christmas, 31st is New Years. Lots of time to look back and reset. I guess I have a lot to account for and a lot to say in this time of self-reflection and growth.
So far, as I can tell, I'm probably finishing N:Era cycle one this year, we're at the finale. There's only a couple parts left. I probably should have had a different due date.
I gotta finish a couple art pieces. One being a massive Christmas art, one being a more personal gift.
I kinda wonder why we do put so much stress. I mean, will the first song I listen to this year really matter, or first thing I write up? In some ways, I believe so. This is a marker just like any other.
Another year makes the last year looks so disappointing in retrospect. 2022 has been hell.
2023 isn't promised to be better. Yet, throughout this, I've finally fought back most of my depression. I think I've been eating better, talking to myself better, behaving better. Been getting my life on track.
There's always more, and I don't exactly know what. I guess I've got a few resolutions to talk about.
I definitely still wanna get N:Era's cycle two started. I'm thinking there might be sixish stories this cycle. I already got like three planned out.
I wanna explore one idea I've had of Cyras' cousin Raynfall bringing a giant rainstorm over Glacialane. I think we should see one more part of Wysdom after all.
Nextly, I wanna do Tunnels under Wysdom. I don't really like that name, but still.
I got a vague idea of one of Lilu's relatives fighting for the crown under suspicious circumstances.
And finally, Sands of Ascalon. That will likely be the "Fangs of Liberty" of next year. But I don't think that's the end of the cycle, I almost think that's just a halfway point. There's gonna be a few important characters.
I wanna get into doing shorts. I really like rehashing old Spongebob plots!
I'm definitely gonna resume reviewing MLP. Maybe KIERAL and I will finish Season 5 and go to Season 6? I wonder how far we will go.
I wanna resume Sponge Standard.
One thing I've been thinking about is starting up MLP fanfics. I talk a lot of shit, at some point I gotta start posting some. I'd also be interested in Spyro fanfics tbh, I gotta few ideas.
Maybe resume Neopets fanfics.
Alright, that's most of my ideas for projects for now.
Sunday, December 18, 2022
Some Tips for Poetry
I enjoy reading poetry, because I feel like poetry, like writing, really gets out a mood. Better, poetry allows you to access a feeling and extract the pure essence without the set up. You can get to the meat of the point.
Poetry doesn't have to be deep, or about war, or hatred, or some other insane principles. Poetry can, and has been, about walks late at night, autumn days. In fact, some of the most popular poems were about exactly that, especially ones from Romanticism.
I tend to think that a lot of people have this idea that poems are inherently pretentious or overwritten. This isn't true, and is a bit of an immature viewpoint on a literary art. Though in all fairness, they may have seen some more amateur poems.
Usually the problem with people's character "themes" or poems, is that they don't know what a poem is. A poem is not writing down pretty stuff, hoping that that works. Poems have a very specific standard of writing. Here's some tips to get started.
Let's start off with the technicals.
Meter
So last night I wrote up a poem spontaneously, and here's what we got:
(Cyras and Rosod:
Trifling and Shifting
Like a potato thrown around
Your blame is cast upon myself
And yet you take part of the piece
How could I ever bear the brunt
Of something I never had
And how could I lose
You who I never had)
This is, not a very good poem.
There's not really a rhythm or flow here yet. When read, this reads like:
Trifling and Shifting
Like a potato thrown around
Your blame is cast upon myself
And yet you take part of the piece
So there's nothing intrinsically wrong with whacky beat from time to time, but this stumbles. You can't really sing with this, or recite this without sounding awkward.
Poems usually have a beat, a rhythm. This is achieved by feet. A foot is a series of stress and unstressed syllables. Here are a few examples.
Iambs are unstressed and stressed. These are associated with the beating of a heart. Pre-SENT.
Trochees are stressed, then unstressed. PRE-sent. Trochees are usually known as feminine versus masculine Iambs.
Anapest: An anapest is two unstressed syllables and one stressed syllable.
"Not a creature was stirring, not even a mouse;"
Question from @KIERAL.
A series of feet is what makes a poem. Iambic Pentameter is a series of five iambs, or five unstressed and stressed syllables.
An Irish Airman foresees his Death
By W.B. Yeats
With four iambs in each line, this is iambic tetrameter. That word tetrameter means four feet of iambs. So each line is ba-BUM ba-BUM ba-BUM ba-BUM.
But wait, "a lonely impulse of delight" isn't in Iambs. We have an iamb (a lone), an iamb ("ly im"), then a phyrric ("pulse of") and finally, another iamb (delight).
The simple explanation is that you don't have to put everything in complete meter all the time, and doing so can even make a poem seem sing-song or seuss-like (A good thing if you're going for that). A lot of times, you can mix with the beat.
In this example, there's almost a sighing breath when you say the line. There's three unnaccented syllables in a row, as he remembers pleasantly how he had fun joining.
Antigonish [I met a man who wasn’t there]
Yesterday, upon the stair,
I met a man who wasn’t there
He wasn’t there again today
I wish, I wish he’d go away…
Even read in monotone there's still power.
Now free verse is an acceptable method of writing. That's where instead of worrying about beat, you just start writing, but even then, without a rhythm, the poem will sound like verbal garbage.
Meaning
Poems usually have a deeper meaning. Instead of saying something directly, a poem is more like trying to emote something through words. Like trying to explain a concept to someone who's never heard that before, and trying to emphathize with someone who knows all too well at the same time.
"Darkness Pays Orr A Visit" (A Guild Wars 2 Poem).
Darkness pays Orr a visit.
With billowing robes of blackened silk,
She beckons us, arms outstretched.
I see my brothers walk forward, greet her as a friend.
So many fold themselves into her embrace.
And even over their cries, and the roars of the beasts,
I hear Darkness call to me with a promise.
But I close myself. I will not join her yet.
Another call is more beautiful,
And I will chase it back to you.
So there's no traditional meter here (in fact this does actually sound like verbal garbage when reading imo) but there is meaning. Without knowing the game, you get the idea this is a war, and the brothers are armymen all falling to their deaths and a man who refuses for a lover.
Now here's Break the Chain, from Fleetwood Mac.
Listen to the wind blow (btw, double stress is a spondee.)
Watch the sun rise
Running in the shadows
Damn your love damn your lies
And if you don't love me now
You will never love me again
I can still hear you saying
You would never break the chain
Instead however, the wind blowing and sun rising implies a more subtle and still atmosphere, however running in the shadows means moving around without speaking. Then finally, there's a snap with the "damn your love, damn your lies."
The deeper meaning is "screw you for being a bad husband, also, I'm only staying with you because of the band." The band is referred to as a chain. Chains link, but at the same time, they are also cold, hard, and metal.
Poetry is often about indirectly saying something that cannot be said straightaway. When writing a poem, think about how you can say this without just putting down "I'm sad because I ran out of cake."
Imagery:
Another winter
The renters go home
The maple goes from crimson to brown
Oh God
My God
Another winter
In a summer town
You can hear the "oh god, my god" as interrupters with how short they are. They give a clear desperation, while we get the idea of the trees slowly dying.
A winter in a summer's town sounds unfathomable. Basically saying even a town that's warm and pleasant ends up falling in ice, and... with time.
The beach is empty
They cover the pools
The patio umbrellas come down
Oh God
My God
Another winter
In a summer town
This goes more about the idea of everybody leaving. The winter is metaphorical and physical, meaning how now poverty is entering the area. The beach is empty, as in there's no tourists. The pools are covered as nobody is swimming in winter.
One little leaf adrift in the breeze
Refuses to fall from the sky
Blown by the wind, it clings to the trees
Unwilling to wither and die
The summer’s over
But I’m still a girl
Cavorting in my carnival crown
From blossom to blossom, I buzz like a bee
Then glance in the mirror, and who do I see?
A middle aged woman inhabiting me
Because it’s winter
In a summer town
"One little leaf adrift in the breeze," is a sign of hope. We go down towards the girl in her "carnival crown". She's still dressing like she's young, but as soon as she glances in the mirror she sees the truth, a middle aged woman.
The imagery is heavy, going with flowers as a person withering. The seasons alter as does the wealth of a person who was at top of the money game.
When writing a poem, think about what makes for a much stronger image. Poems force you into the present, into that moment.
In Summary
Let's look at the Raven.
Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered, weak and weary,
Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore—
While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping,
As of some one gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door—
"'Tis some visitor," I muttered, "tapping at my chamber door—
Only this and nothing more."
The final line is only 4 stresses, but the rest have 8 stresses.
We have strong imagery (midnight, tapping, forgotten lore).
We have strong depth (forgotten lore being a symbol for sense, someone close to sleeping like they're stuck in an eternal dream.)
We have rhythm.
I don't think these are the only three elements that make a poem, but they are amongst the most important.
Thursday, December 8, 2022
Lupegarthe Culture
Lupegarthe is a kingdom of 100,000 Square Miles, known to the world for being shut off.
Dialect
Culture
Religion
Military
Art
Much of art in Lupegarthe is now "plagued" by abstract colors. The idea of using color as a metaphor, instead of painting literally. One of the greatest modern paintings is known as portrait of the death god, but instead of the death god, Golden Apple Rotree is painted in green, her lower half as a tree, and the branches are impaling various crimsons. The portrait is seen as offensive by many as implying she is an evil being, but others are saying she had to manifest that part of herself.
Some religious art is painted of Ascendeds in Wysdom. Particularly, of Sumhyr. However, Snofall has gotten a fair amount of artwork because of her involvement with winter. A replica of her, created from snow, is still preserved in Bloodveil Museum of Arts.
Horror art is very common, especially about isolation. One horror play is entirely done with a cardboard box, and waves in the back, as someone is on a boat sailing the sea ("The Ocean Speaks".)
Politics
History
Immigration
Tuesday, December 6, 2022
Worst Worldbuilding (Featuring Fanfics)
You would think that if anything had good worldbuildings, fanfics would as they don't even have to build their world, or plot, or characters. That's wrong.
Tuesday, November 29, 2022
Rants about Worldbuilding
Swillow thing I unno.
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